Haiku Contest: Choose The Winner!

[Syrobe]

It now is time to pick the winner or our Haiku Contest.

Vote for the best Haiku and choose your Winner by casting your vote during the next two weeks.

Please tell us why you think your choise should be the Winner.
The creator of the best Haiku will receive never ending fame while the Haiku itself will be published in 'Writings'.

You can find all the Haiku's below, including the names of the creator.


TraxGuilidmar

Competition starts
poetry and prose is shared
a smile on each face

Begin now my friends
the rhythm is so simple
let us all have fun


Grouwel

Masses in the clouds
taps so gently on the ground
calming down my fear

(and)

Frustrating at times,
Great piece of machinery,
They are convenient.


RamenDemon

splashing, splashing up
high up in the azure sky,
happiness prospers.


starwing

Dragons in the night
Soaring in the inky black
Reaching for the sky


loveless

And the day has arrived
To thresh the sky
And to thresh the sea

And the sea has embraced me
And it has dispensed me from my cage
Nothing can stop me now


Galadreil

Dragons flying high
Oh the joy to be among
Caressing the wind


the dragon of eternity

thousand words of love
sung by a beautiful voice
a bright new world sings

a voice with much hope
shining through a black shadow
a bright new world sings

a clear young voice calls
for the death of shadows
a bright new world comes

(and)

The darkness grows strong
he runs into the black night
he loses his soul


QueenOfTheShadows

Soul fire burning,
wishful churning quiet slide by
wish for tomorrow.

(and)

Falling leaf burning,
orange, crimson now golden
Whispering rustle, now still

(and)

Languid wind, sweet song
Restless, roaming guiding me
endless under wing

(and)

Laughing waters wild
tumbling, conceited wish
flowing under claw


dfangd

O'er swift rapids
Transcend crushing waves
Embrace the downpour

(and)

Unfurl thy sheer wings
Plunge into oblivion
A heavenly sea


Serenity

Tiger lily sends her tears
from the crying sky up above
onto the dry ground.


DarkDragon

Young hearts burn cold above
Blazing winds sting their saddened eyes
Crying for tomorrow

Brave lonely soldiers
Betrayed by their home far away
Die in the blackness


albvan

Steel hidden beneath
A thousand-headed dragon
Closes the world's eyes
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[Syrobe]

My votes goes to dfangd because of her second haiku:

Unfurl thy sheer wings
Plunge into oblivion
A heavenly sea

I like the style, the language, the sound of it and it has a specific feel.
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- power is gained through wisdom -

[Jasriella]

I placed my vote for the same poem , just for different reasons .
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I am trapped between heaven and hell. My wings carry me upon the winds. Above lies heaven, below hell. Yet I must land in hell to soar in heaven. I am a Dragon!

[Fenris]

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The impossible is only impossible as long as the possible has yet to be proven possible
-Fenris
♣ www.goblinscomic.com ♣

[DarkDragon]

I think it's safe to say that D's got it in the bag once again. though I am certainly surprised that I actually am getting votes...

Edit (5/14): And I'm shocked I'm coming in second place so far...
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May you be in heaven a half hour before the devil knows you're dead.
-An Irish toast

[Jasriella]

Honestly I didn't even know there was a competition until the original thread was locked and the poll went up. But d'fangd dfinitely caught my attention with the first stanza "Unfurl thy sheer wings". It's the one thing that miss the most is the wings and that just hit me personally.
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I am trapped between heaven and hell. My wings carry me upon the winds. Above lies heaven, below hell. Yet I must land in hell to soar in heaven. I am a Dragon!

[the dragon of eternity]

queen of the shadows. I like the wording alot. mine was good to though!

darkdragon: Please watch your spelling and grammar
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you can only run so far.you can only hide so long.you can only cry so much.you can only scream so loud. but you can fight for as long as you need

[Syrobe]

Many Congrats, dfangd, you have written the most liked haikus. They will receive a place in Writings!

And DarkDragon many congrats to you too, being a close runner up.

The competition is now closed.
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- power is gained through wisdom -