New fantasy book on Dragons

[BMDragon]

I am starting to finish the final edit on a book I wrote about how the dragons disappeared from earth. The series will be a trilogy and is written from the dragon’s side of things.

If anyone is interested in reading the rough draft and offering some feedback it would be greatly appreciated. Here is a link to the site, it’s a free PDF download for the next couple weeks.

http://www.lulu.com/content/e-book/dragons--rough-draft/7372857

I hope you enjoy it and if not maybe suggest how it could be improved.

Thanks

Brad

[Jasriella]

I read the introduction and the review and it seems like a good book. Definitely a unique way to go about a fantasy novel. If you can manage to get it published I would definitely like to get a hardcover copy.

The only thing is, you might want to limit your preview of the book. Even if it hasn't been published, I don't think you want to be showing the whole thing to everybody. Who's going to buy the book when they can read the whole thing in one simple PDF file? (besides me and a few others) Plus you might run into someone trying to plaigerise off of it because you don't have the full copyrights yet. Yes you are protected under article 17 of the copyright law, but people always find a way around stuff like that.
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I am trapped between heaven and hell. My wings carry me upon the winds. Above lies heaven, below hell. Yet I must land in hell to soar in heaven. I am a Dragon!

[albvan]

I'm eager to read through your work. And welcome to the forums!

[BMDragon]

Thanks for the welcome.

The book will be going to print in about two weeks after I finish the cover art. It will also have about 25,000 more words added to it over the rough draft. Which is why i am looking for some honest feedback before that happens, before its set in stone.

This is the first book i have written, so still stumbling over quite a few things.

When its all done it can be purchased through Amazon and Barns&Noble. /not that im trying to sell it here LOL.

I dont mind letting people see the rough draft for free. If they like the story they will really like the second book in the series which they will have to pay for.

I look forward to hearing your comments

Brad

[BMDragon]

Just wanted to say hi and that I am finishing up my final edit this weekend for the book and was wondering if anyone had any feedback before I finalize it.

I am pretty excited, cant wait to get the book in print form.

If any are interested i will let you know when the printed version is availiable.

Thanks

Brad

[starvixdraxon]

What is the name of your book? I am curious about your story.